Destiny-chan here, the biggest fic writer in history! Minna killed herself while reading this because she loved this so much that she thought that her life didnt make sense anymore. I know youre gonna like this and Hopeless-chan and Angelique-chan, youre in this! I told ya!
So, my supper fic!
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UCHIHA LOVE
My name is Destiny Tenshin Yamanaka. I have silky lavender hair that is different from my whole family hair and only my eyes look like the one from my family although theyre shinier. Instead of the plain blue, they are a topaz blue, perfect and really expressive. I have 15 years old and I live in Konoha for about 2 years right now, because when I was 5 I was kidnapped and sold as a slave to the leader of the Akatsuki. He raised me as his kid, and when I was ten I became a member of the organization but then he found out that I was the perfect container for the nine biijus and I ran, because it would kill me in the end. But I still miss Itachi and his warm lips in mine.
So I came back to Konoha and only to find out that my parents are dead and that I only have an uncle, an aunt and a baka of a cousin. Her name is Ino, she is blond and I just hate her. But, once in her lifetime she had a good idea, and she told me to go see the Hokage and, when I did, I was automaticaly turned into a chunin, because I was really strong and knew a lot about Akatsuki and so I could be on a good team.
I met my sensei and my teammates about one year and a half ago. My sensei is a silver haired men, really beautiful and mysterious because of the cool mask he wears and his name is Kakashi. I know he wants me and once I saw into his mind with my mind reading powers and I saw him having a vision of us kissing. My team mates are a baka pink haired girl that thinks is so smart named Sakura Haruno, such a dumb name, a blond clown, Naruto Uzumaki, and a cool and emo raven haired boy named Sasuke Uchiha. His the only one in my team with whom I hang out and, although he is really kawaii and likes me a lot, I dont love him and I just cant kiss someone I dont love.
Today Im walking with Sasuke in the street when I hear someone calling my name and I see Angelique-chan and Hopeless-chan, calling me and running in my direction. Theyre smiling a lot and Im sure its good news.
Destiny-chan she says. Itachi is hear
Itachi? Sasuke and me ask.
You serious? I ask.
Yes says Hopeless-chan. We saw him near the ramen place
I start running and Sasuke follows me. I know what he wants but I cant let him kill my one and only love. I have to make them friends again.
Itachi I call once I see him.
He looks at me and takes me into his arms, kissing me full on the mouth.
Please, Destiny, get out of there so I can kill him says Sasuke when we part.
I cant let you kill him, Sasu-kun I say, crying, my eyes looking even more like two beautiful gems. I love him.
Thats why I want to kill him! Sasuke says crying a lot, his eyes already red. I want you for me. I dont care about what happened to my family anymore, I just want you and if I have to kill him to have you Ill do it.
But, Sasu-kun, if you kill him I will die too! I love him too much to live without him.
Dont say that, Destiny-chan he begs. If you feel like that I
I
will have to kill me!
He turns the kunai he has in his hand to him and is about the press it against his stomach when I grab his hand.
Please Sasu-kun, dont do that I say. I love your brother but youre my best friend ever. I couldnt live without you also.
And so I kissed him softly in the cheek. Itachi holds my hand softly and kisses me.
OWARI
I'm glad it's so bad!
One dimension characters (I don't even go to the two dimensions, that would be saying too much xD) and a overdone love triangle! This is a fun exercise of 'what not to do'!
I really like Cry's reading, as well. First time I listened to it I was both flattered and, at first, sad abut some of the comments. Now I'm just happy because it means I did a good job.
I can't.
Even.
Breathe.
This is so funny & Cry's reading of it was just awesome XD