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Most days
5 a.m. is when I’m asleep
And you’re awake.
Later I’m awake
And you’re asleep.

Some times
5 a.m. is “your 10 p.m.”.
When I wake up and it’s night.
It’s when there’s no work
And I’m awake till the morning light.

Some day
5 a.m. is when we meet.
On the street, by your door.
We forget all those screens
And it’s like never before.
Number 50 of my 100 Theme Challenge. It was also 30/30 poetry for the 17th. Since it matched, I knew I had to write it. After hours looking at the paper... I came up with this poem and I dedicate it to my best friend IntriguingBeast and curse the time zones separating us.
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OwnRabbit Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 Awww... this so sad, but beautiful! I love how pragmatic it is!
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MinnaSD Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! It was such an emotional thing to write, I'm glad it turned out good in the end =D
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TheBandBrony Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Writer
I really enjoyed reading this. It's simple and unpresumptuous, but still conveys a sense of longing that runs on after the lines conclude. 
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MinnaSD Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. This was actually a hard poem for me to write and I was close to tears at the end. So, I am glad that some of my feelings did reach others =)
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