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If you think you know what it means
You probably are wrong.
It's much bigger than it seems
And it will make you so strong,
(Or weak, really it depends).

It might remind you of who you are.
You might forget everything else,
Except that you want to play the guitar,
Because it puts a smile upon her face.

It's the silliest thing on the planet
And the one that will make you smarter.
It gives you courage to fight your battles,
And a desire to be looked after.

But it might be none of this.
Every experience is not the same.
Maybe hell, maybe bliss,
And will probably drive you insane.

Now, how many guesses do you want
To guess what this is?
I say, you will just need one,
I have no doubt about it.
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I think the title screws the poem up a little bit, still it's for my 100TC, soooo...
Still I had fun with this, even if the last stanza was a bitch to write. Everything I did sounded bad! I like the final outcome, though!

This is part of my 100 Theme Challenge [link] and it's number 4. Love.
:iconscarlette13:
lovely poem. I like this type of rhymes, so I truly enjoyed.
I especially liked the line "Maybe hell, maybe bliss".
However, rest of poem looked rather simple. maybe too simple. I think it was caused by very simple words used, very few metaphors. Maybe you could try more complex vocabulary. words like "desire", "bliss" make poem deeper and more professional sounding.
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